For my First Draft < Conclusion >

Conclusion written in 9th Sep.

 To sum up, emotions play a basic role to induce one to do in particular way. The reason which control one’s behavior comes after the start of behavior and the feeling(consequent emotion) toward the behavior. Someone can say that the behavior can come from other factors such as reason or obligation. However, although they have an effect on the start of behavior, emotions cannot be excluded in the process of start of the behavior everytime. Therefore, I think human behavior is nearly subject to emotions radically rather than reason.

Conclusion written in 25th Oct. (Modified)

Misunderstanding that reason is the first step of human behavior is not correct. Reason has to be a sort of controller of human behavior caused by various emotions. Then why do people have to consider the starting point and entire process of human behavior? It is because a human behavior has a great effect on a group, a society, a nation, and the world. Even though it is not true that all of the human behaviors do, humanity has seen many incidents caused by one’s or a group’s wrong behavior. Thus, it is very important to recognize the exact principle of behavior and balance the reason and emotions appropriately. The ultimate purpose of Freud’s <Psychodynamic theory> was also to let people know that the balance of the id, ego, and superego(can be substituted to reason and emotions in this opinion) is really necessary. This concept will lead to one’s good behavioral traits affecting the world well.